is Avi Mary Sue?

Oct 8, 20146 min read

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Published: Oct 8, 2014

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Name: Avi

[ ] Is it your real name? (+5)

[x] Is it your real nickname?(+3)

[ ] Is it a human name at all? (+2)

[ ] Does it have to do with their cutie mark? (-2)

So Far: 3

Appearance:

[ ] Does it have a canon character's mane? (+2)

[ ] Is it Rainbow Dash's? (+4)

[ ] How many colors does its mane have? (+2 for each color past 1)(I don't think two black lines really count .-.)

[ ] Does it sparkle or glitter? (+5)

[ ] Unicorn? (+3)

[x] Pegasus? (+2)

[ ] Earth Pony? (-1)

[ ] Alicorn? (+10)

[ ] Does it's base coat have more than 1 color? (+4 for each extra color, a gradient counts as 1 extra)

[ ] Are its eyes deeply moving to other characters? (+3)

[ ] Are they purple? (+2)

[ ] Are they described in thought out metaphors such as "The fiery red of deep passion" (+3)

[ ] Are they known throughout Equestria for their beauty? (+2)

[ ] Are they male? (+1)

[x] Is their occupation something other than scout, guard, or carriage puller? (+1)

So Far: 6

Cutie Mark

[ ] Does it ever change? (+10)

[ ] Do they have more than 1 special talent? (+4)

[ ] Does it cover the entire flank? Ex: Luna's (+2)

[ ] Is it something lame and not very impressive? Ex: cleaning windows (-3)

[ ] Is it something totally amazing that nopony else can do? (+2)

[ ] Are they the best at what they do? (+5)

[ ] Is it similar/same in appearance as one of the main characters? (+3)

So Far: 6

Relationships:

[ ] Are they in a romantic relationship? (+3)

[ ] More than one? (+3)

[ ] With a canon character? (+4)

[ ] With Luna or Celestia? (+8)

[ ] With any of the Mane 6? (+4)

[ ] Are your character and a main character friends? (+1)

[ ] Is it one of the mane 6? (+2)

[ ] Are your character and the Mane 6 pony better friends than she is with the rest of the mane 6? (+2)

[ ] Are they related to a well known/canon/main character? (+5)

[ ] Is it royalty? (+3)

So Far: 6

Personality

[ ] Do they seem to have the same personality as one of the Mane 6? (+2)

[ ] Is it Rainbow Dash? (+1)

[ ] Are they extremely nice, and never really do anything wrong? (+3)

[ ] They are loved by everypony? (+5)

[ ] Except one? (+2)

[ ] Are they hated by everypony? (+5)

[ ] Except one? (+1)

[ ] Do they have a serious personality flaw that hinders them significantly? (-6)

TOTAL: 6

0-8 Your character is kind of boring, spice it up a little!

I'm not going to .3. Avi is me .3. so... yea.

9-12 Well balanced!

12-18 This is good for canon characters, but is really stretching it for an OC

19+ you might have to start over, your character seems to be a little too perfect to be credible

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Elision3

Oct 9, 2014

Kradnę .3.

is Avi Mary Sue?

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0-8 Your character is kind of boring, spice it up a little!

I'm not going to .3. Avi is me .3. so... yea.

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